Thursday, November 6, 2014

The Visit of Muse or a Song of Plagiarizer (Посещение Музы, или песенка плагиатора*) ©, 2014

* - Vladimir Vysotsky's Legacy


The Visit of Muse or a Song of Plagiarizer.*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrT3_AN-y1o


Preamble of Translator or just Me :-))

1. I was just visited today by someone as a competitor ... 




( oh, no .., of course, by Lady Muse ... )



2. In fact such a distraction came to destroy my busy day ...
3. I' got so well confused - continuously annoyed ...
4. So this is MY TRANSLATION, which was just naturally born ...



1
I'm gonna get exploded, as hundreds tonnes of TNT
Inside of me the charge of non-creative harm appeared
I was just visited today by Lady Muse
She paid a visit, get relaxed, but suddenly she left

2
She has, I so believe, well reasonable grounds
And, generally speaking, I don't have a base to whine
Imagine, Lady Muse, at a nighttime and with (a) man
God knows, what those people will gossip toward her

3
Nevertheless I feel so sad and lonely
Because this Muse - people will confirm
She spent a lot of time with Alexander Blok
In past with Pushkin she was living as a friend

4
I've rushed to table, being excited and impressed
But, Oh, my God, please have mercy and save
She's quietly gone, and inspiration disappeared
Together with my money, as taxi service shall be paid

5
I am so mad today, so even I am running inside house
God bless her, well, and I'm still able to forgive
She went in consideration of another artist
She, probably, got upset because of my mild style

6
The huge cake, well decorated and with candles
Got withered  due sorrow - myself I feel discharged
With neighbors, sons of bitch, I drank cognac
The exclusive drink especially to meet her

7
The time is gone, like people on black list
All in the past, I'm yawning from a boredom
She left without words, exactly as a Lady
But I still keep the couple lines from her

8
There're two lines, I'm genius, without any reasonable doubts
Go ahead and bring enthusiasm, laurels and blooms!
Ther're two lines: I just recall the wonderful one moment
When suddenly you have appeared especially before me!


By BORIS K'ZORIN,
the another last romantic ©, Los Angeles, CA 2014

* - The most of supporting pictures are shown to the credit of the youtube link above and its author

You are welcome -
http://wow4singingtranslations.blogspot.com


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ORIGINAL RUSSIAN LYRIC


Посещение Музы, или песенка плагиатора

1
Я щас взорвусь, как триста тонн тротила,
Во мне заряд нетворческого зла.
Меня сегодня муза посетила,
Посетила, так, немного посидела и ушла.






2
У ней имелись веские причины,
Я, в общем, не имею права на нытье:
Ну, вы представьте, ночью муза у мужчины,
Бог весть, что люди скажут про нее.

3
И все же мне досадно, одиноко,
Ведь эта муза, люди подтвердят,
Засиживалась сутками у Блока,
У Бальмонта (Пушкина) жила, не выходя.

4
Я бросился к столу, весь нетерпенье,
Но, Господи, помилуй и спаси,
Она ушла, исчезло вдохновенье
И три рубля, должно быть, на такси.

5
Я в бешенстве ношусь, как зверь, по дому,
Ну бог с ней, с музой, я ее простил.
Она ушла к кому-нибудь другому,
Я, видно, ее плохо угостил.

6
Огромный торт, утыканный свечами,
Засох от горя, да и я иссяк.
С соседями я допил, сволочами,
Для музы предназначенный коньяк.

7
Ушли года, как люди в черном списке,
Все в прошлом, я зеваю от тоски.
Она ушла безмолвно, по-английски,
Но от нее остались две строки.

8
Вот две строки, я гений, прочь сомненья,
Даешь восторги, лавры и цветы!
Вот две строки:  я помню это чудное мгновенье,
Когда передо мной явилась ты!



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